Update! I changed it so that anyone with the link can comment on the document now. My bad, Google Drive can be a pain in the ass when it comes to sharing.

Hey guys, I wasn't happy with a couple of my chapters in my story The Kraeton Chronicles. They focus on the magic system in the story, and so there is quite a bit of world-building there that I can't/don't want to separate. I've tried to condense things and make it easy to digest as much as possible. I've tried to separate parts with action and other things. I'm hoping it has turned out well, and the feedback I have gotten is that it has, but I'm seeking some more feedback just to see what you guys have to say.

The chapters are here:

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

You can give me feedback here or in the word document, I'll check both. There'll be some grammatical errors here in there. I only fix those up after I've done all my editing, but feel free to point them out. I appreciate all feedback guys!

p.s. ignore the coded table at the start.