RE: Can i have a review?

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I like this story, you skipped all the baby and learning phase of reincarnated stories and go directly into action.
Cringy and funnny it's a good way to start and if you find a good balance between serious plot and gags i think we got a new gem here.
I hope you continue you've got a new follower here.

Here is my story if you want to check it http://royalroadl.com/fiction/9560.