Can i have a review?
#1
My story is Bandit Host Club.
As far as i am concerned, please ignore the story first and look into my writing style.
I want to write and practice narrative story with this novel so any kind of review is appreciated.
Thank you.
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As far as i am concerned, please ignore the story first and look into my writing style.
I want to write and practice narrative story with this novel so any kind of review is appreciated.
Thank you.
Link
RE: Can i have a review?
#2'zedeine99' pid='819326' dateline='1481881320' Wrote: My story is Bandit Host Club.
As far as i am concerned, please ignore the story first and look into my writing style.
I want to write and practice narrative story with this novel so any kind of review is appreciated.
Thank you.
Link
Ill review yours if you review mine.(A.I. Actual Intelligence )
RE: Can i have a review?
#3
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I like this story, you skipped all the baby and learning phase of reincarnated stories and go directly into action.
Cringy and funnny it's a good way to start and if you find a good balance between serious plot and gags i think we got a new gem here.
I hope you continue you've got a new follower here.
Here is my story if you want to check it http://royalroadl.com/fiction/9560.
I like this story, you skipped all the baby and learning phase of reincarnated stories and go directly into action.
Cringy and funnny it's a good way to start and if you find a good balance between serious plot and gags i think we got a new gem here.
I hope you continue you've got a new follower here.
Here is my story if you want to check it http://royalroadl.com/fiction/9560.