Review exchange !
#1
Hello everyone,
I just begun my story and wanted to know what other's think about it. Here is the resume and link
Eyes of passion
After being the victim of a bank robbery Helena saw the first "Passionate" of her life and choose to become a scientist to discover the truth behind this mysterious power.
Follow her story in this futuristic world where the hero age has just begun.
It's only the begining and i'm still in the big prologue to introduce every charachter.
Answer here or PM me if you want to trade :)
I just begun my story and wanted to know what other's think about it. Here is the resume and link
Eyes of passion
After being the victim of a bank robbery Helena saw the first "Passionate" of her life and choose to become a scientist to discover the truth behind this mysterious power.
Follow her story in this futuristic world where the hero age has just begun.
It's only the begining and i'm still in the big prologue to introduce every charachter.
Answer here or PM me if you want to trade :)
RE: Review exchange !
#2
I will :)
Currently leveling up my writing abilities will release a new story soon.
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#4
Yeah it is.
Currently leveling up my writing abilities will release a new story soon.
RE: Review exchange !
#5'Anime-Sensei' pid='819402' dateline='1482100251' Wrote: Yeah it is.
How do you want me to review this ...
Well i did review it but if you don't review mine it's not a probleme, i did not put a lot of effort into it.
But your story (even if a bit crazy) is nice viewing the POV of an object is a nice concept :)
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#6
I reviewed your story :P
Currently leveling up my writing abilities will release a new story soon.
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#7'Anime-Sensei' pid='819406' dateline='1482103034' Wrote: I reviewed your story :P
Thanks i just sawed it,
I will add more to my review than just a picture of a box :)
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#8
alright
Currently leveling up my writing abilities will release a new story soon.
RE: Review exchange !
#10'TerminusEst' pid='819423' dateline='1482128503' Wrote: I'm game here's mine
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/8909
Done :)