Could someone review my first novel?
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I need feedback!
I recently started my novel that is wuxia / xianxia based
This is the first time i wrote a web novel.
So i would like to have some feedback.
Feel free to point out things which i might have to work on, or did very badly.
Feel free to point out mistakes.
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/9730
I recently started my novel that is wuxia / xianxia based
This is the first time i wrote a web novel.
So i would like to have some feedback.
Feel free to point out things which i might have to work on, or did very badly.
Feel free to point out mistakes.
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/9730