Review Exchange

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Looking for a review for http://royalroadl.com/fiction/9102 , Dragon Harem Bulletblade King. I got my first review when the story was in it's early phases and it's changed a lot since then. It's more of a comedy fantasy with a tinge of action. It's definitely not something you've read before in some ways, the Harem aspect is downplayed quite a bit.

I'll review your story generously in exchange. My goal is to give a review that encourages both the reader and the author to see worth in their own story, as I think often amateur writers like us tend to discredit whatever work they end of doing and denying it has any value. 
Thanks.