Spirits can be more dangerous than you think [looking for feedback]
#1
Hello, I am new to this website (a friend told me about it) and I have just posted my first story. I have still only got a few views so far and no comments, but I am sure this is normal as there is many stories on this site.
I was looking for some feedback for my story, if anyone is interested please check it out:
Spirits Maligned
http://royalroadl.com/my/fiction/10907
This story originally came about when I thought about the word 'spirits' used to describe alcohol, and how it has another more... dark connotation.
It's a work in progress but any comments at this early stage would be great.
Thanks!
I was looking for some feedback for my story, if anyone is interested please check it out:
Spirits Maligned
http://royalroadl.com/my/fiction/10907
This story originally came about when I thought about the word 'spirits' used to describe alcohol, and how it has another more... dark connotation.
It's a work in progress but any comments at this early stage would be great.
Thanks!
RE: Spirits can be more dangerous than you think [looking for feedback]
#2
Hey, I tried to access the page and it wouldn't let me. Have you published the story on the site yet? Maybe the link is faulty?
Author of The Adventures of a Unique Snowflake
RE: Spirits can be more dangerous than you think [looking for feedback]
#3'SeaGangster' pid='822219' dateline='1489177805' Wrote: Hey, I tried to access the page and it wouldn't let me. Have you published the story on the site yet? Maybe the link is faulty?
I just tried and it works for me. What error do you get?
You can just search for "spirits maligned" for now to find it. Sorry for the trouble.
If there is an admin reading this, can you please see if there is something strange going on?
Thanks.
RE: Spirits can be more dangerous than you think [looking for feedback]
#4
It is telling me I don't have permission to view it.
Author of The Adventures of a Unique Snowflake
RE: Spirits can be more dangerous than you think [looking for feedback]
#5'junek777' pid='822230' dateline='1489191733' Wrote: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/10907
You got to take out the "/my" part.
Thanks! Sorry still getting used to how the site works (: