Review swap request
#1
"I was hoping to get some feedback to the story of that I've posted, so that I may improve it. The prologue starts off slow, but afterwards I feel the story's writing style improved. I will greatly appreciate the help as well give out what I think of your story.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/10483
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/10483
RE: Review swap request
#2
Wassup Kronos? I'd be glad to swap reviews with you. My story is a bit further along than yours, but I think our chapters are about the same length if you want to just do 5 chapters of mine.
I'll PM you my feedback for your story!
My story can be found in my signature.
I'll PM you my feedback for your story!
My story can be found in my signature.
Author of The Adventures of a Unique Snowflake
RE: Review swap request
#4'Kronosthegreat' pid='822673' dateline='1490248693' Wrote: "I was hoping to get some feedback to the story of that I've posted, so that I may improve it. The prologue starts off slow, but afterwards I feel the story's writing style improved. I will greatly appreciate the help as well give out what I think of your story.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/10483
Sure thing.
My novel is here: https://royalroadl.com/my/fiction/9116
I have a lot of words up already so I'm ok with a partial review if my work isn't compelling enough for you to finish it :)