proofreader/editor

#1
Hallo everyone,

I’m writing a new novel and I’m looking a proofreader/editor. English is not my native language and I make a lot of structural mistakes. I write around two chapters of 1,8k a week, but there are weeks where I write more and weeks I write less.
I already have 18 chapters out and would love if those were edited, but the new chapters take priority. I don’t find myself a good or experienced writer but I do my best to write a fun and interesting story. I hope someone here can help me improve the experience of the readers.
I put the link of the novel here so that you guys can check the martial and see if you can help me with the project.

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/9724
Greetings,
Shayan

RE: proofreader/editor

#2
Greetings, I am a member of the group Draft in royalroad. We are a group dedicated to proofreading/editing the works of fiction of writers on royalroad, who need assistance in improving their stories. We do not bash or otherwise negatively critique writer's works of fiction, though we may occasionally give (hopefully) beneficial suggestions on ways to alter your work of fiction so that it becomes more engaging or so that it flows more smoothly. 
If you would like us to proofread/edit your work of fiction, you must post a request on Discord's Draft server under the text channel: #business. To post your work of fiction on Discord:
1) Login to Discord/make an account for Discord
2) Go to #business
3) Login to google mail/ make an account for google mail
4) Make sure at least one chapter is on a google document (preferably the specific chapter(s) you need assistance proofreading/editing)
5) Go to the share tab in the google document
6) Click it to get a shareable link
7) Copy the link
8) Post that link to #business with the request to proofread/edit the chapter(s) (or even just post one chapter and request that we proofread/edit your whole work of fiction and we will take care of converting the rest of the chapters of your story posted on royalroad for you)


I will be happy to proofread/edit your work of fiction!  Your work of fiction is thus guaranteed to get the attention it deserves.
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