Review Swap Request
#1
Hi there,
I've completed the first draft of my novel, Incrementum, and could really use some constructive feedback from fellow readers and authors. I will provide honest and constructive feedback for any author that wants to swap reviews. For readers, I will just thank you a lot :)
All feedback is welcome, ranging from critiques of writing style and technique, game design or even just if you liked it or not.
Incrementum is a LitRPG novel with two female leads. I am reviewing the final fifteen chapters that are not on Royal Road and will post those over the next two weeks. I uploaded the first twenty-six chapters already.
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/9116
Thanks!
M.M. Abbey
I've completed the first draft of my novel, Incrementum, and could really use some constructive feedback from fellow readers and authors. I will provide honest and constructive feedback for any author that wants to swap reviews. For readers, I will just thank you a lot :)
All feedback is welcome, ranging from critiques of writing style and technique, game design or even just if you liked it or not.
Incrementum is a LitRPG novel with two female leads. I am reviewing the final fifteen chapters that are not on Royal Road and will post those over the next two weeks. I uploaded the first twenty-six chapters already.
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/9116
Thanks!
M.M. Abbey
RE: Review Swap Request
#2
Hey! I would love to swap reviews!
My review style till now has been going chapter by chapter and writing down and questions, comments, or concerns I have as a reader and then sending a PM. You've got quite a few chapters up, so it may take me a little bit to get through it all.
Anyway, my novel is in my signature, it is a LitRPG as well. I hope to hear from you.
What I would like to hear from you, especially, is your take on the building of my female characters.
My review style till now has been going chapter by chapter and writing down and questions, comments, or concerns I have as a reader and then sending a PM. You've got quite a few chapters up, so it may take me a little bit to get through it all.
Anyway, my novel is in my signature, it is a LitRPG as well. I hope to hear from you.
What I would like to hear from you, especially, is your take on the building of my female characters.
Author of The Adventures of a Unique Snowflake
RE: Review Swap Request
#3'SeaGangster' pid='822792' dateline='1490605916' Wrote: Hey! I would love to swap reviews!
My review style till now has been going chapter by chapter and writing down and questions, comments, or concerns I have as a reader and then sending a PM. You've got quite a few chapters up, so it may take me a little bit to get through it all.
Anyway, my novel is in my signature, it is a LitRPG as well. I hope to hear from you.
What I would like to hear from you, especially, is your take on the building of my female characters.
Awesome! I have a very similar process and will start going through your novel tonight, focusing on your female character building.