New Story

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Hi guys. I'm new on royalroadlegends and have uploaded my first story which is named Guardians of the Helm.
It's about people fighting to protect humanity from a great danger fifty years after they humans are forced to leave earth and set up civilisation on a new planet. It's mostly adventure and action, will include futuristic technology and mechs. 
I would be grateful if you read it and give your views about the story. Any sort of criticism or review is welcome and will be very helpful.
Hope you enjoy reading.
Link: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/11533