Looking for more reviews, willing to trade

#1
Hey! I've been posting a story here for a while, and I'd like to get some more reviews for it if I can. I'll happily trade, as that'll give me a good chance to discover other great stories as well!

Here's the link: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/9591

Thanks, everybody!
My ongoing work: The Clockwork Raven--clockpunk survival adventure of two teens vs. a sky full of dragons (RoyalRoad) (Wordpress)

RE: Looking for more reviews, willing to trade

#2
'SamChapman' pid='823858' dateline='1493935268' Wrote: Hey! I've been posting a story here for a while, and I'd like to get some more reviews for it if I can. I'll happily trade, as that'll give me a good chance to discover other great stories as well!

Here's the link: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/9591

Thanks, everybody!

I dove in an enjoyed the story. Left a review, and happy to discuss further if you'd want additional feedback on anything in specific. If you'd like, the story I'm working on is here: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/11909 and is a project that I'm doing with my kids. Its just for fun, but hopefully enjoyable. We're enjoying seeing how the community is taking to it.

Keep up the good work, I'll be following you :)