I don't really know if this might work, but please check out my new webnovel?

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Yeah, I just wrote 2 chapters, and I think I am going to post up to 5 only, might change that later. 
I am not looking for fame here, I just want some opinions and how to improve myself.

My story's name: My Cursed Beloved
Genre: Fantasy, Adventure and Tragedy. 
Anti-Hero Lead, Magic, Male Lead, Supernatural

I will really appreciate it if you help me with your honest opinions. 


Link:  https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12286/my-cursed-beloved