Help with realism - What would you do during an alien invasion?
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Hey guys!
I started writing a story (link below) and I'm trying to make it as realistic as possible. So far the reviews and comments - which have been helpful - haven't been as in-depth as I would like. If anyone would be willing to look at it I would appreciate it. Any honest comment/review is great but I'm specifically looking for help with the character's decision making. Thanks for any help in advance!
Mature story link: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12090/judgement
I started writing a story (link below) and I'm trying to make it as realistic as possible. So far the reviews and comments - which have been helpful - haven't been as in-depth as I would like. If anyone would be willing to look at it I would appreciate it. Any honest comment/review is great but I'm specifically looking for help with the character's decision making. Thanks for any help in advance!
Mature story link: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12090/judgement
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Checkout my story here: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12090/judgement
Checkout my story here: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12090/judgement