Correct me if I'm wrong, I'm not quite sure that I'm in the right place to post my issue.

I've been working on something new, and you know how you get when you think you have a good idea, but you're the only one who thinks that. I'm in desperate need of a review mates, not just you random yapping but something useful something I can grow on. Don't worry about hurting what little emotions I have left I truly will value a professional opinion, besides, my own voice is too optimistic and somehow I can feel my conscience snickering in the dark recess of my mind. 

Your words will be pondered profusely, so click the link and tell me what's on your mind.
Suzerain: Chapter-1 "Sour problems but Sweet Tobago."