Looking for reviews

#1
Hey, I was hoping I could find someone interested in reviewing my story. I'v only got 3 chapters done so far. I'm starting the fourth one. I'm working to get a chapter done a week and I do most of my work on the weekends. It's far from a final work. I'm trying to get the story written then I'll go back and "perfect" it. I have a plan for at least a few more books to follow this one.

Chasing Freedom

Also, I recently had a thought for a prologue that I plan on writing soon, so there will be that added in.

I am absolutely willing to trade reviews. Review me and let me know if/what story you would like me to review. I try to be a fair critic. I don't like pople just telling me something sucks, so I try not to say that, just offer bits of advice and point out what I like.

RE: Looking for reviews

#5
Hi!

  I just finished reading the prologue of your story. It's nice! But, those super detailed story-telling should be lessened, it makes you forget the idea of the paragraph(is it just for me, i guess?) 

   I'm planning to read it until the latest chapter then, make some constructive review for you.

   If you like to, can you review mine too? I also needed some feedbacks.

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