WC's Mutual Reviews 2.0
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Once upon a time, when the forums were less dead than they are right now, I made a review swap thread that worked out pretty well for everyone involved!
First, know that I consider RRl an amateur writing site (mostly because I myself am an amateur writer) so my reviews take into account the author's background (e.g. non-native english speaker, young, first time writer etc.) and I focus mainly on providing constructive criticism, and consider ratings relatively unimportant except for attracting larger audiences.
tl;dr I give long reviews but rate like most people on the site.
That being said, if you want to get a free review, you'll have to write one for me too!
The story I am currently working on has around a hundred pages or so, so it is incredibly tiny and should be easy to read and review quickly. Honest feedback and criticism appreciated!
Here's the link: Pagebreak
Here's the queue:
wilberforce
pink.ish
necrophedius
heaven dream
(queue is closed)
P.s. if you have a longer story that you want to get reviewed, please note that I may not read all of it for my review but will make that clear in my review.
First, know that I consider RRl an amateur writing site (mostly because I myself am an amateur writer) so my reviews take into account the author's background (e.g. non-native english speaker, young, first time writer etc.) and I focus mainly on providing constructive criticism, and consider ratings relatively unimportant except for attracting larger audiences.
tl;dr I give long reviews but rate like most people on the site.
That being said, if you want to get a free review, you'll have to write one for me too!
The story I am currently working on has around a hundred pages or so, so it is incredibly tiny and should be easy to read and review quickly. Honest feedback and criticism appreciated!
Here's the link: Pagebreak
Here's the queue:
wilberforce
pink.ish
necrophedius
heaven dream
(queue is closed)
P.s. if you have a longer story that you want to get reviewed, please note that I may not read all of it for my review but will make that clear in my review.
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Oh I'm interested! I actually read a lot of your other story too a couple months back, so I'd be happy to check out your new one. It'd be cool to have someone do a review on my thing too, I don't have any yet x)
Anyway I'll start reading yours now - I'll get a review up by tomorrow night at the latest, I'll try to get it done now though.
e: my story called Once More
e2: I did a review - actually really enjoyed Pagebreak, added it to my bookmarks liked it better than re:write.
Anyway I'll start reading yours now - I'll get a review up by tomorrow night at the latest, I'll try to get it done now though.
e: my story called Once More
e2: I did a review - actually really enjoyed Pagebreak, added it to my bookmarks liked it better than re:write.
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Did ei83mon's review here: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12190/different-worlds?review=154747#review-154747
Thanks so much! I'll get to it right away!
(also, absolutely loved your review. I'll take your criticisms into account for any and all future chapters and edits!)
'sinkingship' pid='825881' dateline='1499148806' Wrote: Oh I'm interested! I actually read a lot of your other story too a couple months back, so I'd be happy to check out your new one. It'd be cool to have someone do a review on my thing too, I don't have any yet x)
Anyway I'll start reading yours now - I'll get a review up by tomorrow night at the latest, I'll try to get it done now though.
e: my story called Once More
e2: I did a review - actually really enjoyed Pagebreak, added it to my bookmarks liked it better than re:write.
Thanks so much! I'll get to it right away!
(also, absolutely loved your review. I'll take your criticisms into account for any and all future chapters and edits!)
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And review for sinkingship's story done as well, check it out:
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12374/once-more?review=154775#review-154775
That clears up the queue, check out the reviews i've done in this thread so far, and see if you want one like that!
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12374/once-more?review=154775#review-154775
That clears up the queue, check out the reviews i've done in this thread so far, and see if you want one like that!
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Thanks for your review! It's really helpful stuff. Really appreciate it.
~writing is hard~
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Can you also review mine? It's only 67 pages long. And, I never reviewed someone before, if you don't mind.
My fiction: It That Laments
A story about a pitiful man.
Heroes of the Collapsing World (Dead with a half-assed ending)
A story about a pitiful man.
Heroes of the Collapsing World (Dead with a half-assed ending)
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I actually read the first chapter of your new story a while ago and was meaning to give it a read. I liked what I saw.
Here's mine: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12313/the-undying-prince. I believe you read few chapter of it a while ago, but this is the rewrite. Just hold off on reviewing for the next couple days, I just have to finish rewriting the last three chapters of Arc 3.
Here's mine: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12313/the-undying-prince. I believe you read few chapter of it a while ago, but this is the rewrite. Just hold off on reviewing for the next couple days, I just have to finish rewriting the last three chapters of Arc 3.
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#8'Bukiyou' pid='826030' dateline='1499609294' Wrote: Can you also review mine? It's only 67 pages long. And, I never reviewed someone before, if you don't mind.
Sure thing! You're on top of the queue! I'll send you a PM soon, too. The link to mine is here: Pagebreak | RoyalRoadL
Thanks for participating!
'baronblackwell' pid='826040' dateline='1499634878' Wrote: I actually read the first chapter of your new story a while ago and was meaning to give it a read. I liked what I saw.
Here's mine: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12313/the-undying-prince. I believe you read few chapter of it a while ago, but this is the rewrite. Just hold off on reviewing for the next couple days, I just have to finish rewriting the last three chapters of Arc 3.
Oh yeah, I think I remember! I think you hadn't posted a lot of chapters then and we decided to postpone it or something, or I could be remembering incorrectly.
Just let me know when the rewrites are done and I'll do your review asap!
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Oh yeah, I think I remember! I think you hadn't posted a lot of chapters then and we decided to postpone it or something, or I could be remembering incorrectly.
Just let me know when the rewrites are done and I'll do your review asap!
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Will do. I'll start reading yours tommorrow.
Oh yeah, I think I remember! I think you hadn't posted a lot of chapters then and we decided to postpone it or something, or I could be remembering incorrectly.
Just let me know when the rewrites are done and I'll do your review asap!
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Will do. I'll start reading yours tommorrow.
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Completed review for Bukiyou's It That Laments: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12478/it-that-laments?review=156875#review-156875
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Review completed for baronblackwell's Undying Prince: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12313/the-undying-prince?review=157004#review-157004
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Oh, I'm in! I need some critics to fill in my heart to write again. I am happy to read yours tonight and get the review up right after that~
here the link to my story.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/9509/freedom-shadow-of-sins/chapter/135256/prolog-remake-and-chapter-one-two-chapte
here the link to my story.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/9509/freedom-shadow-of-sins/chapter/135256/prolog-remake-and-chapter-one-two-chapte
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#14'Venom 1309' pid='826123' dateline='1499813949' Wrote: Oh, I'm in! I need some critics to fill in my heart to write again. I am happy to read yours tonight and get the review up right after that~
here the link to my story.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/9509/freedom-shadow-of-sins/chapter/135256/prolog-remake-and-chapter-one-two-chapte
Sweet! I'll put ya at the top of the queue!
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Okay I'm in, below is the link of my story.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12612/the-heir-of-wilberforce
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12612/the-heir-of-wilberforce
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#16'Wilberforce ' pid='826316' dateline='1500491842' Wrote: Okay I'm in, below is the link of my story.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12612/the-heir-of-wilberforce
Sweet, i'll add ya to the queue.
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I don't know if you're still doing this but your story caught my eye so I'll read it anyways and of course review it.
p.s. If you're interested, here's mine http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12644
p.s. If you're interested, here's mine http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12644
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Hi,
I actually have two stories (both of the same series and heavily related as one is the prequel of the other). But you can read just the first few chapters of the second volume without fearing to lose anything. It may actually be a good experience if you come back and read the first novel in its entirely later (just don't finish the second one, which is still ongoing then the first one).
First volume: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/5921/tales-of-astora-legacy-finished
Second volume: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12018/tales-of-astora-insurrection
I will read yours when you confirm back :).
I actually have two stories (both of the same series and heavily related as one is the prequel of the other). But you can read just the first few chapters of the second volume without fearing to lose anything. It may actually be a good experience if you come back and read the first novel in its entirely later (just don't finish the second one, which is still ongoing then the first one).
First volume: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/5921/tales-of-astora-legacy-finished
Second volume: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12018/tales-of-astora-insurrection
I will read yours when you confirm back :).
Currently published novels on RoyalRoadl:
Tales of Astora: Legacy (Action, Fantasy)
Tales of Astora: Insurrection (Action, Fantasy)
The Hanged Man (Drama,Mystery, Psychological)
Tales of Astora: Legacy (Action, Fantasy)
Tales of Astora: Insurrection (Action, Fantasy)
The Hanged Man (Drama,Mystery, Psychological)
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#19'pink.ish' pid='826386' dateline='1500784611' Wrote: I don't know if you're still doing this but your story caught my eye so I'll read it anyways and of course review it.
p.s. If you're interested, here's mine http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12644
Yes, I am still doing this! It's been slow because I always like giving a lot of time to the stories I'm reviewing. Thanks so much for participating, I'll add you to the queue!
'necrophedius' pid='826388' dateline='1500793375' Wrote: Hi,
I actually have two stories (both of the same series and heavily related as one is the prequel of the other). But you can read just the first few chapters of the second volume without fearing to lose anything. It may actually be a good experience if you come back and read the first novel in its entirely later (just don't finish the second one, which is still ongoing then the first one).
First volume: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/5921/tales-of-astora-legacy-finished
Second volume: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12018/tales-of-astora-insurrection
I will read yours when you confirm back :).
Oh, so you don't want me to read the second one? Should I just give you a review on the first one? .-.
I'll add you to the queue as soon as you clarify :P Mb, for not understanding tho
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#20'WhoCares' pid='826394' dateline='1500812030' Wrote:'pink.ish' pid='826386' dateline='1500784611' Wrote: I don't know if you're still doing this but your story caught my eye so I'll read it anyways and of course review it.
p.s. If you're interested, here's mine http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12644
Yes, I am still doing this! It's been slow because I always like giving a lot of time to the stories I'm reviewing. Thanks so much for participating, I'll add you to the queue!
'necrophedius' pid='826388' dateline='1500793375' Wrote: Hi,
I actually have two stories (both of the same series and heavily related as one is the prequel of the other). But you can read just the first few chapters of the second volume without fearing to lose anything. It may actually be a good experience if you come back and read the first novel in its entirely later (just don't finish the second one, which is still ongoing then the first one).
First volume: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/5921/tales-of-astora-legacy-finished
Second volume: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12018/tales-of-astora-insurrection
I will read yours when you confirm back :).
Oh, so you don't want me to read the second one? Should I just give you a review on the first one? .-.
I'll add you to the queue as soon as you clarify :P Mb, for not understanding tho
Nah it was me who was not clear enough. The review for the first one only would be fine ;). The second volume maybe if the story interests you and you intend to finish the first one too. Hope I am clear this time.
Currently published novels on RoyalRoadl:
Tales of Astora: Legacy (Action, Fantasy)
Tales of Astora: Insurrection (Action, Fantasy)
The Hanged Man (Drama,Mystery, Psychological)
Tales of Astora: Legacy (Action, Fantasy)
Tales of Astora: Insurrection (Action, Fantasy)
The Hanged Man (Drama,Mystery, Psychological)