Hello,my name is Merly23@ and I'm writing this because I need help.I'm writing a novel and I need to know the opinions and the feedbacks of the people that read it.Also If you could give me an advice I would be grateful.I hope that the story doesn't bore you.
Thanks for the help in advance.Here is the link https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12279/the-isekai,also you can find my story in Internet putting The Isekai.