Review swap
#1
Review my story with constructive criticism and I will review yours. Link below;
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12612/the-heir-of-wilberforce
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12612/the-heir-of-wilberforce
RE: Review swap
#3
Okay thanks, I've already started reading your *Undying Prince*. If I've enough points to constructively criticize after the first twenty chapters, then I'll. If not, then I'll read more. Anyway, I'm already impressed with the style, the falling celestial dragons, the cultivators and sorcerers.
RE: Review swap
#4'Wilberforce ' pid='826337' dateline='1500570072' Wrote: Okay thanks, I've already started reading your *Undying Prince*. If I've enough points to constructively criticize after the first twenty chapters, then I'll. If not, then I'll read more. Anyway, I'm already impressed with the style, the falling celestial dragons, the cultivators and sorcerers.
Okay, I'll start reading yours tonight.
RE: Review swap
#5
I'd like to cancel our review exchange. For an explanation why, refer to the comment I left on on your prologue.