can someone review this to see how bad it is?
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hallo, I have recently made a web novel, of which you (yes you, why else would you look at this shit?) can review so you can make a conclusion on how to improve my fiction since I can be a bit thick when it comes to seeing the flaws in my work.
I want to know where i am falling behind or doing bad since my incredibly low standards can't tell what is good and what is bad although I know that i suck as much as a dyson ball multi floor 2 upright vacuum.
my fiction
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in terms of story, i will spoil it to you because i am so evil (muhahahahahaha). the MC is a dude who is very nice until his wife and newborn son are eaten by trolls, at which point he becomes dark and depressed, so he wanders around the world for a purpose and because he has nothing left to live for.
I want to know where i am falling behind or doing bad since my incredibly low standards can't tell what is good and what is bad although I know that i suck as much as a dyson ball multi floor 2 upright vacuum.
my fiction
thread on promote your fiction
in terms of story, i will spoil it to you because i am so evil (muhahahahahaha). the MC is a dude who is very nice until his wife and newborn son are eaten by trolls, at which point he becomes dark and depressed, so he wanders around the world for a purpose and because he has nothing left to live for.
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