RE: What happened to Second Life Online???

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I liked the story, I thought it had potential to be a good story. There are much worse ones on royal road. It's to bad he deleted it since I believe it was even on the trending fictions bar of royal road. Sometimes authors just have to ignore what people say and do what they want, it's their story after all.
Please tell me if you find any grammatical errors or major plot holes and I will do my best to fix them.