Looking for feedback to my new writing style
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I'm new to the first person style of writing and went with a cop story instead of my comfortable fantasy standard. Please check it out and give me a honest review thx. https://royalroadl.com/fiction/13373
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I will have a look. As long as you look at my novel. If you like betrayals, and an interesting plot it's got that. There also an aspect of mystery to that.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14364/celestial-game
First of all, when you write, you must do it this way.
"Hello, please read this," he said.
Or
"Hello, please read this."
Note the comma before the "speech mark" you can also do full stop.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14364/celestial-game
First of all, when you write, you must do it this way.
"Hello, please read this," he said.
Or
"Hello, please read this."
Note the comma before the "speech mark" you can also do full stop.
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I dont understand why, but when I click on the link, I see a 404 error. Mb u can the copy text here?
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I understand ur problem. When i was student i used to hate writing essay, my writing style was amfull. So i cheated a little. If you have problems with writing then I recommend top essay writing service uk. This is really a team of professionals who always save me. Everything was done in time and quality.
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#4Colossus Wrote: I'm new to the first person style of writing and went with a cop story instead of my comfortable fantasy standard. Please check it out and give me a honest review thx. https://royalroadl.com/fiction/13373
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It might be because this post was from 2017. The story may no longer exist :(
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#6Colossus Wrote: I'm new to the first person style of writing and went with a cop story instead of my comfortable fantasy standard. Please check it out and give me a honest review thx. https://royalroadl.com/fiction/13373I dont understand why, but when I click on the link, I see a 404 error