RE: Looking for feedback to my new writing style

#2
I will have a look. As long as you look at my novel. If you like betrayals, and an interesting plot it's got that. There also an aspect of mystery to that.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14364/celestial-game


First of all, when you write, you must do it this way.
"Hello, please read this," he said.
Or
"Hello, please read this."

Note the comma before the "speech mark" you can also do full stop.

Re: Looking for feedback to my new writing style

#3
I dont understand why, but when I click on the link, I see a 404 error. Mb u can the copy text here?
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