Dont have much to say, if you are looking for a modern futuristic setting with fantasy elements then check it out. Got inspiration from various novels.

http://royalroadl.com/fiction/10653/blackcrown


Three hundred years ago multiple meteors broke into earth's atmosphere and landed in various places. The meteors change the world. By releasing strange substances into the earth, air, and water the planet started to change. It was not until ten years later that the first batch of superhumans was born. They had abilities that could not be explained. Superspeed. Superstrength. Magic. The superhumans showed the world that all of it was possible. They called the abilities EXO and the people who wielded such an ability, EXO users.


They quickly found out that not every EXO was the same. One EXO user had one EXO ability and what that ability was could be categorized into one of three types. Offensive, Defensive or Support.

The government was the first to act after five years. Every EXO user must be subjected to whole new laws and they must get their abilities under control. Specialized schools were built all across the world that were made to train them. Under the pretense of saying it was to develop their abilities, the government was actually building an army. Humans were not the only ones to change…

I'm rather enjoying your story. I havnt read the original just the rewrite version. Not sure how the original turned put. But the rewrite is a good solid read so far. Keep up the good work and keep the brainfood coming