http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17236/briox-the-magus

Briox isn't the best or the brightest magus of Islandyer. But he may just be the last and not by choice. The Hyser empire conquered his homeland in only three months. Two years later he remains in hiding struggling to survive when his speciality is condemned by the Holy Hyser Church.This is the tale of a magus, his creations, and the heights that they may reach.

This is my first story and unedited



I currently have 5 chapters up, i'm just hoping some more people will read it and tell me what they think