Hello guys, I don't know if it's a bit early to promote it here, but I would like some feedback.

Its called "The Guardians of Chaos: Mara's Story"
My story is about an elderly woman named Mara, that goes on an adventure to safe "The Being" a god. To achieve this she needs to travel beyond the universe itself. This may seem like a strange concept, but every adventure always has a young and strong hero, so why not give it a little twist?

This is the first time I ever "published" something like this, I am very new to writing.

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/17276/the-guardians-of-chaos-maras-story

I hope to better myself, to one day write something that you can sell.

Thank you in advance, and have fun reading!