I am willing to help with any and all fictions with grammatical and spelling error checking. I am also willing to help look for plot holes or inconsistencies in anything submitted. If you have taken the time to read this far thank you and have a pleasant day/night. Also a current argument i am having is, on or two spaces after a period to start your sentences. Feel free to comment or pm. Honourably yours, a common Coreh_!

Hi, i was wondering if you could have a go at my fiction

http://www.royalroadl.com/fiction/1789

i know i made a lot of error in tenses and stuff like that
but i'm not sure on what to fix