So hello all, i'm here posting this between juggling multiple projects and IRL issues and i have finally decided to ask for some help for a project that i put on a little break while i do some more research on it's science and tech.... oh and work on other projects to i guess.....

Basically i'm asking for reviews strictly about the story since i already know that the grammar is worth about 3 and a half stars and my usual writing style is....... well..... wonky and uses way to many ellipsis with weird capitalizations meant for emphasis.....

i want to know whether what i'm writing is decent Sci-Fi, if the story itself is good, and on a separate but related matter if the story seems PLAUSIBLE or REALISTIC in any way.....

so yeah that's about it..... the story itself is on a hiatus, but i DO plan on going back to work on it in the future and before that time i would like to know some more opinions than the reviews i have now which can be summed up as "I like it, when will you write more?"

so here's a link to the story: A Numbers Game

and that's all, thanks in advance to all those who help me out with this!!!!

AaronDragon out........