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To Fellow writers of "Writer To The End"

Hello fellow writers. Weismann here. Currently i am focusing on a single story which can be found here :

So the point is, i need some opinions on this story about any plot holes and mistakes in consistency. I will post chapters again from April since I have a lot of pending academic work and exams these next few months. It will be very helpfull if you commented or critisised my work.

Thank you.

Yours Truly
Hmm, I read a bit of it. I'll give you a little feedback later but you should drop by the discord chat for some real time critique if you're really interested. Good luck!
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