Willing to do a review for a review

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I recently published a story and it's currently in the 7th chapter. I would like to get an honest review and in return, I will give my most honest review.

Summary:

One day, before the end of the eleventh grade and the start of vacation, something changes. Yowai goes to sleep, as usual, but his awakening is anything but usual. Waking up at midnight, Yowai receives strange abilities.

What will he do with this newly acquired power? How will it affect his life?
Yowai’s journey has just begun, but many difficulties still lie in his way.


Link:

http://royalroadl.com/fiction/14277/yowai-season-1

Thank you :)
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