RE: Willing to proofread and review work

#2
Hi there,

My novel, Centifire, is still in its initial stages, and I was wondering if I could get your help with proofreading/comments on what may need more clarity.

If you're up for it, the link is in the sig. And feel free to say no, because I know these type of things are time-consuming, especially with genres you may not like.

Thanks! If you need more information, just drop me a PM.
Please, check out my game-element, fantasy novel: CENTIFIRE
https://i.imgur.com/pU3DTvf.png

RE: Willing to proofread and review work

#4
Hey there,

I would be really happy if you reviewed my "novel". I started with some real good ratings, but now I've started to get really bad ones, with no feed back at all! So I don't what to do to improove... (except the grammar) I also don't get many critical comments....

Thanks fo your help :)

By the way here is the link to my novel: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/11765/the-grey-line-between-light-and-shadows