Review Swap
#1
For anyone who's interested, I would be happy to have a review swap, and go over anything you feel like talking about. (Yikes, that sounded super lonely.)
I'm hoping to get some more reviews on my own story and would love to find some new stories to read.
If you would like me to focus on any particular part of a review (like if you're not sure if the beginning of your story is engaging enough or if you're worried about if a character relationship is coming off the way you're hoping it will) just let me know.
The link to my story: The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
I'm hoping to get some more reviews on my own story and would love to find some new stories to read.
If you would like me to focus on any particular part of a review (like if you're not sure if the beginning of your story is engaging enough or if you're worried about if a character relationship is coming off the way you're hoping it will) just let me know.
The link to my story: The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
TheResonantWordsmith
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
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#2
Hello!
I'd like to trade reviews. Here's a link to my story: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/15005/mimi-o-saku
I'd like the review on my fiction page, and I guess I'd like a focus on my transition from Chapter 1 to Chapter 2, because that's where my views start dropping off.
Let me know if you want anything in particular!
Thanks.
I'd like to trade reviews. Here's a link to my story: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/15005/mimi-o-saku
I'd like the review on my fiction page, and I guess I'd like a focus on my transition from Chapter 1 to Chapter 2, because that's where my views start dropping off.
Let me know if you want anything in particular!
Thanks.
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#3
Awesome! I'll PM you.
TheResonantWordsmith
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
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#4
I too would like a review, just because why not?!
My story is in my signature.
If you ("you" meaning whoever) I will review your story as well, though I'm not on every day. If you message me we can work out the details.
My story is in my signature.
If you ("you" meaning whoever) I will review your story as well, though I'm not on every day. If you message me we can work out the details.
Do you like eating potato chips? Who cares. Check out my story, The Elder of Mediocrity: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/16019/the-elder-of-mediocrity
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#5
Hey, why not? I haven't gotten any reviews yet, and I could use some brutally honest criticism.
Look at my sig for my story! It's still a WIP, and I'd like to get whatever input I can while there's still time to change 99% of it. ;)
Look at my sig for my story! It's still a WIP, and I'd like to get whatever input I can while there's still time to change 99% of it. ;)
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#6
Awesome! I'll PM you
TheResonantWordsmith
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
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#8
Absolutely!! I'll PM you in a sec
TheResonantWordsmith
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
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#9
I'm game. I'll review yours in a little while. This is mine: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/16079/zeroth-knight
I mainly wanna know how the first couple chapters pull you in. Granted, anything else you'd like to talk about, feel free to do so. I absolutely want to improve so any readers I do have, will have a better experience.
I mainly wanna know how the first couple chapters pull you in. Granted, anything else you'd like to talk about, feel free to do so. I absolutely want to improve so any readers I do have, will have a better experience.
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#11
Hi,
I'm game for a review swap. My story is linked in my signature.
My review style would be long and detailed in helping you to grow.
I'll be doing public-facing review. So, anything less than a 4 star reviews, I'll write and explained it here. If it's more than 4 stars, I'll write in our your review page instead.
Tell me if you are game. Or anyone else for that matter. Always willing to help. :)
PS: If you want to do review swap for me, I'm more than willing to accept. But please bear in mind the golden rules, alright.
I'm game for a review swap. My story is linked in my signature.
My review style would be long and detailed in helping you to grow.
I'll be doing public-facing review. So, anything less than a 4 star reviews, I'll write and explained it here. If it's more than 4 stars, I'll write in our your review page instead.
Tell me if you are game. Or anyone else for that matter. Always willing to help. :)
PS: If you want to do review swap for me, I'm more than willing to accept. But please bear in mind the golden rules, alright.
What is life without a dream. And are dreams without actions. And what are actions without context.
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Heroic Chronicles (Currently on Hiatus)
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#12
Excellent!!! I'll PM you three in a moment. And acederequiza, I just saw your thread before I checked this one. Sorry for the redundancy haha
TheResonantWordsmith
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
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#13
Just an update: A lot of people have responded to this, which I love...but also means I have a lot to read in the near future. So far, I've posted 2 or 3 reviews and am currently working on the rest.
I'm finishing up with a couple tomorrow, so if you haven't received any PM messages concerning specific chapters, like the White Walkers, they're coming....eventually.
I'm finishing up with a couple tomorrow, so if you haven't received any PM messages concerning specific chapters, like the White Walkers, they're coming....eventually.
TheResonantWordsmith
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
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#14
Don't sweat it! I'm reading your book and taking notes as I do so. I'm digging it so far!
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#15
I'm not sure you know how happy I am to hear that.
TheResonantWordsmith
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
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#16
Hey guys! Just an update: eyejester's review is done. I'm about 3 chapter's away from ChipMunster's. I'm waiting for a few more chapters before posting Chaoxtheory's review.
I've started tooTimid's, ozefen's, as well as jamespauladdington's which means that as soon as I'm done with ChipMunster's review, I can start acederequiza's.
I have to say, guys...I'm really enjoying these stories so far. Even if I rate yours before I'm done reading, rest assured I'll finish it. You guys are putting out great stuff.
I've started tooTimid's, ozefen's, as well as jamespauladdington's which means that as soon as I'm done with ChipMunster's review, I can start acederequiza's.
I have to say, guys...I'm really enjoying these stories so far. Even if I rate yours before I'm done reading, rest assured I'll finish it. You guys are putting out great stuff.
TheResonantWordsmith
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
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#17
ChipMunster's review is up.
TheResonantWordsmith
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
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#18
ozefen's review is up. On to the next!
TheResonantWordsmith
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
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#19
I forgot to thank you for your review in this thread. Really thorough and helpful. 10/10 would swap again. ;)
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#20
No problem at all! You're story's great, and I've had a blast reading it. Just need to find time in the coming week to catch up on the new chapters.
I should have a new story to post sometime next month, I'll let you know when I'm getting ready to post :)
I should have a new story to post sometime next month, I'll let you know when I'm getting ready to post :)
TheResonantWordsmith
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind
Check out my first web novel- The Rider with the Golden Torc
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/14970/the-rider-with-the-golden-torc
My short story collection - Inside My Mind
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17874/inside-my-mind