Feedback exchange offer - Sci-Fi
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Hi all,
I was wondering if anyone would be interested in any kind of feedback exchange deal over my new sci-fi story. I'm hoping for some kind of chapter by chapter feedback swap as I upload it, like I used to do on fictionpress, but I'm willing to discuss terms.
The story is futuristic science-fiction and follows Jace, a young man of the space age, Elthera, a metahuman warrior maiden, and their adventures and eventual romance in frontier space. It's set on an interplanetary space station that has been recently recaptured from hostile AI robots. At the moment, I'm thinking it may be T rated (13+), although it may have to become 15 rated at some point.
At the start, Jace is visiting Elthera and she has to decide whether or not she wants to mentor him. I'm trying to get across that Jace feels kind of awkward, despite Elthera's efforts to put him at ease.
Metahuman Maiden
I was wondering if anyone would be interested in any kind of feedback exchange deal over my new sci-fi story. I'm hoping for some kind of chapter by chapter feedback swap as I upload it, like I used to do on fictionpress, but I'm willing to discuss terms.
The story is futuristic science-fiction and follows Jace, a young man of the space age, Elthera, a metahuman warrior maiden, and their adventures and eventual romance in frontier space. It's set on an interplanetary space station that has been recently recaptured from hostile AI robots. At the moment, I'm thinking it may be T rated (13+), although it may have to become 15 rated at some point.
At the start, Jace is visiting Elthera and she has to decide whether or not she wants to mentor him. I'm trying to get across that Jace feels kind of awkward, despite Elthera's efforts to put him at ease.
Metahuman Maiden