Private Review for my Fiction
#1
Hi,
I have written a first chapter for a story I'm eventually hoping to write on this site.
The story idea is about a full fantasy world where the main character is a species of mouse. It has a bit of survivalist story telling later on in the fiction, but I wanted to create a story where you feel rooted in the main character's feet, understand his perspective and grow more grounded in the fiction as it grows.
I'm looking for private reviews, as I am not confident enough to post directly on to this thread. I may post my later drafts on the thread later, for public viewing.
If you would like to review my fiction, please notify me below. I will private message you my draft.
(feel free to be as nitpicky as you like!)
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I have written a first chapter for a story I'm eventually hoping to write on this site.
The story idea is about a full fantasy world where the main character is a species of mouse. It has a bit of survivalist story telling later on in the fiction, but I wanted to create a story where you feel rooted in the main character's feet, understand his perspective and grow more grounded in the fiction as it grows.
I'm looking for private reviews, as I am not confident enough to post directly on to this thread. I may post my later drafts on the thread later, for public viewing.
If you would like to review my fiction, please notify me below. I will private message you my draft.
(feel free to be as nitpicky as you like!)
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RE: Private Review for my Fiction
#2
Hi!
I'm a bit late, but I would be happy to read your first chapter. :)
I'm a bit late, but I would be happy to read your first chapter. :)